Tuesday 29th September 2015
It all started in the deepest,shadowy part of the forest in the middle of nowhere where there was a historic, threadbare castle standing still in the smouldering, caliginous, fuddle. All you see is hideous, begrimed flowers that was prepossessing the bush. Although, the sky was ill lighted, and the moon was covering the cloud also, the moon was shining throw the castle. However, there was people froufrou as rowdy as they could. The castle maintains magnificent, spectacular treasures. Even though the treasure was charming and attractive, it was to dangerous to touch as it was cursed. It was cursed by the depraved, villainous and abandoned enchanted.
by Sofiyo, 5T
Sofiyo, I am over the moon with your effort on the beginning of this, what sounds like a frightening story!
Your adjectival phrases are amazing! You’re clearly expanding your vocabulary day by day.
Do you know what all of the words mean though?
Can you tell me what caliginous and smouldering mean?
My goodness Sofiyo, what a descriptive piece of writing. I’m trembling in my seat terrified to find out what is going to happen next.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you
caliginous means fog and smouldering means smoke
Thank you sir I will keep up my good world
amazing words
Amazing Sofiyo! I’m glad you know!
Good job Sofiyo I like your word’s prepossessing and magnificent keep up the good work!!
WOW! sofiyo you really blown me away with your words such as smouldering what does it mean.
thank you Joshua
thank you latisha
Your the best girl .
thank you khadeejah
Thank you everyone that liked my peace of writing I really appreciate it
Lots of good adjectivs but remeber not to put lots of adjective in there
ok i will remember not to put lots of adjectives in there